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Friday, July 16

Friday 55 Flash Fiction



Lying there, cold and still, he knew for certain she was rigid with fear.

The terror was rising from the depths of her stomach.

Yet she held on.

The whites of her knuckles rippled as she held on tight.

He would tell her what to do! Damn Him!

“Wider”


Damn these 6 monthly dental checks!


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
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17 comments:

  1. anthonynorth16 July 2010 at 09:10

    Oh, I love a good horror story :-)
    Nice one.

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  2. Anonymous16 July 2010 at 09:40

    LOL...OMG I thought it was about a carnival at first. Very well done and so true...:) Have a great Friday :)

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  3. Brian Miller16 July 2010 at 11:17

    eeep! you said dentist! scary 55...lol.

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  4. nonizamboni16 July 2010 at 12:41

    Oh, you got me! And scared me too. I wanted to tell you how much I like the quote on your sideboard about drama vs. 'being anything but happy.' I SO needed to read that--thanks, Denise!!

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  5. lv2scpbk16 July 2010 at 13:41

    I left you a Versatile award on my blog. Please check it out and pass it on. It's on my Everyday Life's Issues blog. (Part of the ABC Wed. team) Barb

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  6. jabblog16 July 2010 at 14:02

    Love it! Expressing everyone's not-so-well-hidden fears . . .

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  7. One Prayer Girl16 July 2010 at 14:03

    Oh how I can relate. I have found a dental practice who will baby me through the whole process....lots of Novocaine, patience and caring concern.
    :)

    PG

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  8. Chris16 July 2010 at 14:17

    I love the image on your sidebar, with the "there comes a time..." quote over a flower image, did you create that (not the quote) or find it somewhere? Lovely.

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  9. The Weaver of Grass16 July 2010 at 16:09

    That perfectly describes me at the dentist!

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  10. Bubba16 July 2010 at 17:14

    Sounds like somebody has dentophobia!

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  11. G-Man16 July 2010 at 18:50

    Thank God you still have your own teeth!!
    Most excellent 55 My Dear.
    Loved the suspense!!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  12. KB17 July 2010 at 00:48

    You had me going there. Have a good weekend.

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  13. Sheri17 July 2010 at 04:43

    ha! what a clever gal you are, speaking on behalf of so many of us ;) great 55, mrs. nesbitt!

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  14. Anonymous17 July 2010 at 14:51

    Well that kept me hooked!! And it's now reminded me of my dental appointment in September!

    CJ xx

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  15. Jay17 July 2010 at 19:30

    Hahaha! I was convinced she would turn out to be a reluctant pillion passenger! LOL!

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  16. Icy BC19 July 2010 at 16:18

    I like this..You've got me going on to another direction until the end..LOL.

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  17. Anonymous23 July 2010 at 08:37

    And then, when she's convinced the worst is over, he reaches for the drill.

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