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Friday, September 25

Friday's Fun!

My second time with this fun project!


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.





She looked into the deep blue eyes, searching for clues.

The eyes held her stare, penetrating into the very marrow of her bones.

Alone in that room she was rooted to the spot.

Panic was rising in her stomach!

She had to turn away..



close the bathroom cabinet door and get her but into action!

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12 comments:

  1. jabblog25 September 2009 at 11:04

    Ha ha ha - love it!

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  2. Anonymous25 September 2009 at 11:06

    You're catching on beautifully!

    You might enjoy my 55 for this week.

    Ciao,

    Chef Kar

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  3. Dr.John25 September 2009 at 12:01

    I love 55s with a twist.
    This was a great 55

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  4. G-Man25 September 2009 at 16:56

    If her cabinet was open, how could she see her reflection?
    just askin.....:P
    But my big mouth aside...
    Excellent 55 Mrs. Nesbit!!!
    Thank you so very much for joining our Friday Funfest.
    Hope to see you next week as well...Take care
    galen

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  5. mrsnesbitt25 September 2009 at 17:30

    G-Man...the cabinet had a mirror on the front of the door! Just like ours!

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  6. Sara25 September 2009 at 21:43

    You've left me hanging - I want to read more! PS. Would love to meet up when we're up your way x

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  7. Leslie:26 September 2009 at 01:49

    That was great! I should try it, too.

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  8. Oman26 September 2009 at 04:02

    this indeed was great. thanks for sharing.

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  9. Akelamalu26 September 2009 at 10:59

    Another great job Mrs. N! :)

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  10. Mona26 September 2009 at 13:46

    lol! that was a great twist in the end!

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  11. Cheryl26 September 2009 at 19:12

    I loved it!

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  12. listen for azure27 September 2009 at 04:36

    Very nicely done!!

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Thank you for your comments, always nice to know somebody has taken the time to let me know what they think.

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